Bind DNS isn't working. Needing help with named.conf and zone file.

My first question is that I only have one NS (NS1) for my domain that is self hosted. For the second I'm trying to use ns2.afraid.org with a duplicate of my zones on there. I'm not sure if this works but the only information I was able to find was a comment mentioning you could use a service similar to afraid.org for this. Is this acceptable?

Secondly are my named.conf file and zone files configured correctly? I duplicated everything on afraid.org except for 1 subdomain for testing and everything works except for that one subdomain.

Named.conf

Code:

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options
{

    directory      "/var/named";        // "Working" directory
    dump-file      "data/cache_dump.db";
        statistics-file    "data/named_stats.txt";
        memstatistics-file  "data/named_mem_stats.txt";


    listen-on port 53  { any; };
    listen-on port 53  { 127.0.0.1; };

    //listen-on-v6 port 53  { any; };
    listen-on-v6 port 53    { ::1; };

    allow-query    { any; };
    allow-query-cache  { localhost; };


    recursion no;

    dnssec-enable yes;

    dnssec-validation yes;

    dnssec-lookaside auto;
};

logging {
        channel default_debug {
                file "data/named.run";
                severity dynamic;
        };
};

view "external"
{

    zone "murdok.org" IN {
            type master;
            file "/var/named/murdok.org";
    };


};
include "/etc/rndc.key";

controls {
        inet 127.0.0.1 allow { localhost; } keys { "rndc-key"; };
};

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Zone File

Code:

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$TTL 1D
$ORIGIN murdok.org.
@              IN      SOA  ns1.murdok.org. ryan.murdok.org. (
              2011120100 ; serial number
              2h        ; refresh =  2 hours
              15M        ; update retry = 15 minutes
              3W12h          ; expiry = 3 weeks + 12 hours
              2h20M          ; minimum = 2 hours + 20 minutes
              )
; main domain name servers
              IN      NS    ns1.murdok.org.
; mail domain mail servers
              IN      MX      10 mail
; A records for name servers above
ns1          IN      A      192.168.0.3
; A record for mail server above
murdok.org        IN    A        192.168.0.3
mail          IN      A      192.168.0.6
www          IN      A      192.168.0.3
linux          IN      A      192.168.0.3
files          IN      A      192.168.0.3

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CentOS 6.5
Bind

Thanks!